For this strip I tried to make a transition scene between where they were and their home, and I´m not sure if it is 100% clear… Maybe it is clear. Also panel 2 and 3 are supossed to happen inside the bus.
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For this strip I tried to make a transition scene between where they were and their home, and I´m not sure if it is 100% clear… Maybe it is clear. Also panel 2 and 3 are supossed to happen inside the bus.
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Did you consider using a background like in http://friendsyasw.com/comic/knowing-the-enemy/ for the bus scene, or was that just a one-off ‘because Rick’?
(Busses are terrible to ride in, lol.)
Also, “you’ve been acting strange all the way home” would be better language, though I’m not criticising Daniel’s choice of words here particularly in the heat of the moment…
Thanks for that ! Ha ha ha, I’m surprise I didn´t noticed that grammar mistake before, so thanks !
And for the bus scene I took inspiration in this HP’s strip http://www.housepetscomic.com/comic/2017/05/15/the-soul-of-the-poet/ but when I finished it I realized it didn´t work so well for me, that for several reasons. But well, it’s a lesson learned