Well that was quick xD
Little nitpick, the dialogue is the only way you can tell that a timeskip occured, I’m not really sure how to properly convey it, but maybe a motion-blur like effect into the panel would convey a sort of screenskip or something?
Yeah I agree… in paper it sounded like the timeskip was going to be clear, but the execution could have been better. Oh well, lesson learnt!
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